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My Story in a Poem

Posted on Thu, 06/14/2012 - 15:36

My story is set to poetry.

I was so excited when on that perfect day, we decided to create you

I was nervous for me.

The day came that I thought all perfection had come, only to be disappointed

I was nervous for you.

I came to realize that miracles take time, so I resolved to be patient in my heart

But I yearned for you.

Years go by, constant disappointment fills my heart with sorrow so very much

And I weep for you.

So many try to comfort me to make me feel normal, although I feel not quite a woman

And I weep for me.

One day I wake up to find a miraculous astonishing surprise of a hope now long forgotten

So I rejoice for you.

Now the nervousness sets in again hoping so much that my dream does not end this day

So I pray for you.

The time comes, after countless life defining years, that my miracle will meet me today

So I yearn for you.

Those special cries and beautiful eyes, ten fingers and ten toes, and the most perfect nose

The amazing miracle is you.

The pain was long and harsh, but I find myself never bitter on these accounts

Because my reward is you.

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Submitted by Anonymous on Thu, 06/14/2012 - 18:21

That is so beautiful and touching. Congrats and best wishes.

Submitted by Andrea on Fri, 06/15/2012 - 01:26

Love your poem it sums it all up beautifully thank you and congratulations x

Submitted by DCat on Fri, 06/15/2012 - 01:33

That was a very good read. Thank you for that little hope of inspiration. I just recently got my BFP for child number 2 and these last 2 years has been difficult in accomplishing a full term pregnancy. Congrats to you and I will pray for you as well!

Submitted by SM on Fri, 06/15/2012 - 07:47

I expected something cheesy when I clicked on the link... but that was absolutely beautiful.  Brought tears to my eyes.  Congrats!

Submitted by Whit on Thu, 07/05/2012 - 13:40

I love your poem.  Throughout the 4 years I've been TTC I've gone through the emotions you described.  Thank you for sharing this and I hope that I can know that joy very soon! Congrats!

Submitted by Julia on Sat, 07/14/2012 - 22:01

Beautiful poem. I can completely relate and I wish you the very best.

Submitted by Tiffany on Fri, 07/27/2012 - 00:15

As a poet myself and a TTC'er, this really hit the spot with all the emotions involved, and the awaited joy that we all long to receive. Simply amazing poem!

Submitted by Pragathi on Tue, 07/31/2012 - 03:09

This poem aptly describes a women's wait from being a Wife to Mother!

Submitted by Emj30135 on Sun, 09/09/2012 - 14:48

Loved the poem! It describes what most women go through in their journey to conceive! So touching, it made me cry! I am hoping that I will get a miracle very soon! Congratulations on yours and God bless! :)

Submitted by Anonymous on Tue, 10/23/2012 - 17:11

Amazing...love!

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